Dungeonkills's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Priorities]

Wow, props to this beautiful piece that you have created. I've never before seen such unique animation where colors are lively and the world feels real in a way. The man and the dog were extremely well made, and the story was quite a beautiful one.

I find your use of the camera quite interesting too. You kept the camera inside the cockpit and moved it around freely on the island, demonstrating pretty well the space of an environment. Transitions were also smooth and pleasing to the eye.

If I were to give feedback, the strongest point I would work on is the music. Definitely need to work on the music that was put into this. During the entire movie, the music was quiet and calm, which did not match the mood for several parts of the story. Some more intense, dramatic tones would've been great to acquaint the plane crash, or the storms. And something more exciting for when he started chasing the dog around and when the plane flew over their heads.

I couldn't help but notice some of the animation concerning the movement of the characters. Limbs seemed a bit stiff and when either the man or the dog ran, they appeared to glide more than propel. Try to make the dog's legs bend more, maybe study the movement from a real one?

Nonetheless, I really enjoyed this, and I hope that my criticism will be useful to you. I look forward to further content from your group! 8/10 for me.

[Vees NG commercial]

I would've enjoyed seeing a colab for something like this. You've got the right idea, but you don't just need the family of animators in this; you need the actual family of animators to MAKE this.

[- Spider -]

Pretty good!

Great animation, I like the sort of horror-comedy turn to it, but what it would really need is some sound effects. It didn't feel as real as it could've been, like when the man is enjoying his coffee I was expecting him to go "Aaaaahhh" and when he stabbed the spider there should've been a slicing sound, the voice and yelling just didn't quit it. Pretty good though, just keep sound effects in mind next time.

Basset-Hound responds:

Thanks, I notice the lack of sound effects when I look back at the movie now, I´ll keep it in mind for my next movies. Thanks for the review

[Skyrim Collab]

The collab could've been much better

I can certainly see that the videos are meant to contain humor in them, but what I can certainly not see is all that much humor. You should've probably shared your plans on your collaborations because 2 videos are about the arrow to the knee joke, another 2 are about shouts, the 5th one is simply putting a cooking pot over a merchants head and hitting it with your sword, and there's this one, well, I couldn't really find any sort of reference of Skyrim in it apart from the similiar looking helmet. Play the game a little, learn of everything that there is to offer. You could have easily made stuff on the Thieve's Guild, The Dark Brotherhood, or even the beginning of the game. I must give say though, some of them were actually good, just try to share your plans at first so that there aren't any similiar jokes and try to improve the length and comedy.

[Backwards Day]

Dude...

Your videos... they're gold! Definetly a unique way of animating, but man I LOVE IT. As always, you have that good sense of humor in you and decided to bring it out into this video. I liked the exagerations like eyes popping out and the huge fish. An absolute 5/5 and 10/10. Congrats, and I'm begging for you to make more, they are what food is worth to a starving man.

[Pokemon Prodigy Episode 1]

Noo...

Uhm, biggest problem I see is that I can't understand a thing that is being said! I'm just asking myself what type of mic you guys used and how loud you were actually speaking. I would've loved a little bit more custom animation too. I sure hope that you guys can improve this by a lot!

chaostheory95 responds:

ok thanks for the pointers I will ask my friend (the animator) to have a look at these problems and hopefully you will find the next episode a bit better.

[Stick Matrix]

No real purpose

This animation.... uhm yeah all I see to it was some random scenes put up together with some music. Matrix? I really don`t see any in here. You should really TRY to put a story into this.

[ACML III: Bliss]

Crazy!

First of all, the main menu was sooooo refreshing for me, it felt great. The video started off and I told myself that this is the next step for flash animation quality. The hatred and envy in the song really went deep woth the video. I respect this, good work.

[Operation: Graveyard]

Truly amazing

I was hooked up ever since I got on the title screen. This video is simply awesome. Great story, the animation blew my mind, and the fights were really entertaining too. A big bravo to you my friend, this is one of the best animations I've seen in a while.

[Link's Barrel Beat]

Can't seem to stop watching it

You know this loop song has gotten me oddly addcited to it, probably because of the beat, maybe because of the links, but I like it. Cool video, keep it up ; )